100WC Challenge 3 - Connection

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Where am I? Why am I here? How did I get here? I have to get out of here...but how? Then I thought, my phone, I can make a phone call! I need to get a bit of reception so I'm wandering around. Then suddenly I get one bar of reception. I was waiting and waiting for mom to pick up, when the connection broke. I hear footsteps, coming towards me. Who is it?

Erin, Grade 5

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  1. Mrs S27 May 2016 at 11:27

    Dear Erin,

    Oh my, the suspense! I'd love to read more. I hope it all turned out well.

    Just check your tenses - sometimes you write in the present tense and then in past tense. Try to remain constant.

    Well written. Keep up the great effort.

    Mrs S.

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